[OC] [FB] Abroad (Missing you)

submitted 3 weeks ago by

Goodman@discuss.tchncs.de

Sleepy but sleepless
7th floor 9th door
I miss you
more than before

So I write
to kiss you goodnight
Before my flight
In my dreams with you
Tonight.

By me, Goodman

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boltzbruh@lemmy.world

3 weeks ago

This reads like a Weakerthans’ song <3

Goodman@discuss.tchncs.de

OP 1 week ago

Thanks for reading :)

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